Thursday, February 28, 2013


Splosh splash! I was sleeping in the car. When suddenly I heard rushing water as my brother pressed the button to slide the window down. It was so noisy that I sat up and looked out the window. The car had stopped in a car park where there were about 5 or 6 cars. I wondered where we had stopped. As I walked out there was a long bridge with a river underneath it. My brother shivered as he held onto the pole to get across. Wait my dad called you have to go with us. I took a step onto the bridge and immediately I creep-ed up to the bar and crouched down to see what my brother was scared of. My eyes turned big as I saw what it was . It was a humongous river.

 I thought it might of been as long as Te-mata peak. But then a second later I thought it might of been bigger. It rushed fast and loud that I couldn't hear my dad in the distance. Look my mum shouted there is a jungle trip over there! Everyone was excited including me. I am coming wait for me! my dad shouted. Everyone was ready for the jungle trip. There were leaves the color of rust swishing away as I took step by step. Birds started to chirp in the tall trees. Wow I said look down there its water from the rushing river washing up against the surface. I took off my shoes and took a step in the water.

 It felt cold as Ice. There was a tree near the water it looked beautiful like there was no one in the world but only me. This looks like nature I shouted. I went to hug the tree to give it some company. Drink the water mum shouted drink it! I looked at the water and thought it was salty. I looked at my reflection in the water and took a sip. Even though it had leaves and stuff in the water taste pure and like normal water! I took another sip and another and another until my mum said lets carry with the trip. Wait I want my brother Gaurav to have a sip but my brother was too scared. So I rolled my eyes and got out of the steep hill it wasn't really a hill it was pretty small like as big as a chair from the tip to the bottom. Hurry up! my dad wailed quickly. We carried on when suddenly we saw a steep hill right next to the path we were walking on.

 It had no gate. So I stayed by where the trees were so I wouldn't fall off into the deep river. Lets turn back my dad cried breathing like he had run around akina park 20 times without stopping. If you guys won’t come well then I’m going to sit in the car and wait. Lets go! I was cross I still wanted to carry on with the jungle trip. But I had to go. We came back to the little steep hill again this time my brother took a sip and screamed I want to stay here forever and ever in my life. You will get bitten by bugs and things like that my mum lied so she could try and make him hurry up so we could go. My dad and my other brother disappeared in the distance they were in a hurry we came back to where we started. As we got back in the car I cried that was an adventure!

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